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Not Quite Punk
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oostermeijer
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Registered: March 2003 Location: Pembrokeshire /Wales/UK Posts: 1,373
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Mon April 18, 2005 16:05
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Rating: 7.00
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Hmmmmmm, Like it but have some comments if I may , I find it a little unsharp, could be my monitor but maybe not, I like the background but think the foreground lets it down, makes it look cheap, maybe you can pull the background further to use as foreground as well and last, the hand on the leg!!!! Makes it look like a claw!. I always see that too late on my photos , maybe you haven't noticed it before but this is a common problem with hands. All these ladies must keep you busy jamie.
------------------------------ Kind Regards Aad Oostermeijer
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www.touchstonephotography.com
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J.R.Criton
Free Account
Registered: September 2003 Location: OH Posts: 92
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I see what he means by the focus. I think this is done nicely but judging by your other photos I don't think you put as much soul into this one like you did your other one. But if I was around attractive women like these too my mind would be on other hings as well.
Over all though this is good.
------------------------------ "I am convinced that the only people worthy of consideration in this world are the unusual ones. For the common folk are like the leaves of a tree, and live and die unnoticed." — The Scarecrow
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JamieAU
Disgruntled
Registered: February 2003 Location: Perth, Western Australia Posts: 276
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I was trying for a different feel in this shot rather than full on glamour like normal. I'm not very good at it though! The focus is an editing issue though as the print sized shot is nice and sharp. Some shots don't reduce very well. Thanks for your comments.
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pixelkat
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Registered: January 2006 Location: east tennessee Posts: 1,008
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Sat January 14, 2006 02:26
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Rating: 8.00
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how about a bit more fill light on the right. otherwise I like it. the overall feel is nice, could be a tad sharper but I also have the problem of loosing sharpness when reducing size for internet.
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JSAYB
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Registered: March 2006 Posts: 11
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Mon March 27, 2006 18:00
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Rating: 8.00
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